Monday, April 27, 2009

..........u guys choose the title !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

As I fade into the night
as my memories turns into dreams
as i walk away from this life
the life is walking away it seems

they are all gone away
seeking their own paths
left with tears and a smile
left us to deal with the aftermaths

they were our friends
they were our brothers
we all were lost for sure
but we were lost together

we remember those days
that we lost in the sun
we remember those days
when we were many yet one.

6 comments:

DOM!N!C said...

this is not the best of my but still pretty gud .............
before commenting u guys need 2 give a title to this poem !!!!!!!!!!

the best title will get a prize ...........(A STRONG KICK IN HIS NUTS :))

Saket Ranjan said...

Let there never be silence
Let it never get dark
Let me never get lonely
O friend, don't leave my side
'coz when thou shalt be gone
The sun shall never be so bright

Title: i don't want any prize from you. mu ha ha.(its ur poem. u deserve to give it a title)

Siddhartha said...

ok bakhla u rock!!!i had heard that that people on drugs are creative....now i am sure.....u rock buddy....keep them poems coming.....make us proud...

Abhilasha said...
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The little girl.. said...

Lost..

ANSHU said...

....unfelt ...
coz lotsa ..phases