As i look back ,all i seem to see
That my life hasn't been ,what i wanted it to be
I've changed and so have you
Changes are inevitable and there's little we can do
We can hope for better or say a prayer
But these changes can't be undone cause life isn't fair
All promises charred and memories fled
As the days that we cherished rot and bled
Only reminiscence is the silence between
And the pain that wouldn't let go of me
As it stirs the fire within the ,fire which ravaged my soul
And brought the changes which made me whole
This is me like I've always been
Uncaring cold and distasteful within
I've evolved from a boy whose dream he cherished
to the dark man whose nightmares he buried
buried underneath the fire within
just ashes of the boy I've been .....................
3 comments:
Another dark satire from the master of dark writing. You know what, this piece of urs can be turned into a masterpiece by someone who can create good music for it. Try to find a rhythm for this. I know this will rock as a song which is already so forceful as a poem.
Cheerzz!!
This Dominic is the ultimate.....the level that all poets aspire for but few achieve.....i dunno if this is a fluke(i sincerely hope that it isn't) or an harbinger of the things to come(from ur pen ofcourse) but this poem rocks buddy....ryt now i am drunk but even then i have not been spared from the forceful effect ur poem's had on me.....keep it up........aur zyada ud mat:)....
THnks everyone man !!!!!!!!
darker stuff will be here sooN!!!!!!!!!
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